Kurt Vonnegut had eight rules for writing fiction. They are brilliant, all eight:
1. Use the time of a total stranger in such a way that he or she will not feel the time was wasted.
2. Give the reader at least one character he or she can root for.
3. Every character should want something, even if it is only a glass of water.
4. Every sentence must do one of two things -- reveal character or advance the action.
5. Start as close to the end as possible.
6. Be a sadist. Now matter how sweet and innocent your leading
characters, make awful things happen to them -- in order that the reader
may see what they are made of.
7. Write to please just one person. If you open a window and make
love to the world, so to speak, your story will get pneumonia.
8. Give your readers as much information as possible as soon as
possible. To heck with suspense. Readers should have such complete
understanding of what is going on, where and why, that they could finish
the story themselves, should cockroaches eat the last few pages.
One of my favorite Vonnegut books is his debut,
Player Piano, which is not one of his most popular by any stretch. Its ending contains an astounding revelation about human nature.
I highly suggest you read it >